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Post by ninjagirl101 on Oct 15, 2007 17:36:33 GMT -5
Your name is Saudran you have white hair black eyes two big yellow fans. personality:Kind caring strong smart and scary when angry. likes:training being with friends playing with your pet wolf that's white with red eyes her names Kira and playing your flute.Dislikes:people who call other people freaks perverts people who hurt Kira or your friends.Your team mates are Yasha and San both guys.Your sensie is a girl name Ming.You have a wolf demon inside of you called Akira White wolf with red eyes just like Kira.You have a happy life. You Yasha San Kira Sensie Ming
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Post by ninjagirl101 on Oct 15, 2007 18:59:23 GMT -5
~story starts~ Mom:Wake up dear.You:I'am up i'am up.You took a shower got dressed brush your teeth brush your hair and went down stairs.Dad:Good morning Saudran.You:Good morning Dad.Mom:Here dear eat up.You:Thanks Mom.After you ate you where ready to meet your team.You:I'am leaving bye Mom and Dad.Mom and Dad:Bye Honey.You:It's so hot today.Temari:Hey Saudran.You:Hi Temari.Temari:Going to meet your team.You:Yup how about you.Temari:Same.You:mabe one day if are teams go on a mission together we can both meet each other Team mates.Temari:Hope so and soon.You:Yeah I have to get going bye Temari.Temari:Bye Saudran.San:Hey Saudran.You:Hey San and Yasha.Yasha:morning.Ming:Good morning everyone.You:Good morning sensie Ming.Ming:ok today we are going to train today.Everyone:Okay.After training.Ming:that's it for today everyone tomarrow we are going on a mission with another team dismissed.You:Bye everyone.You:Hey Mom and Dad.Dad:Good your back.You:Mom Dad tomarrow we are going on a mission for 2 weeks okay.Mom:yes honey dinner done.You:okay Kira dinner time.Kira came running in the kitchen and ate her food.You:Kira tomarrow you are coming on a mission with me.Kira nod her head.~Next Day~You and Kira where walking to the village gate at 6 in the morning.You saw someone and I guess it's someone on the other team your traveling with.You got alittle closer and relizied it was Temari.You:Hey Temari you said while running over to her.Temari:OMG!we are traveling together are wish came true.You:YAY! you said while jumping up and down with temari.You:Oh Temari this is my pet wolf Kira.Temari:Oh how cute you are she said while petting Kira.And Kira lick her face.Temari:that tickles.You:so where the rest of your team or brothers if I can say it.Temari:still home eating breakfest I left early.You:so what do your brothers look like.Kankuro is a pervert when he sees a pretty girl has a puppet name crow and where's face paint.You:I hate perverts.Temari:He hates my cooking.You:that nerve of that guy oh what about the other.Temari:well you heared of Garra.You:Yeah I fell bad for him everyone hates him it's sad to she someone go through so much pain like that.Temari:Wow that was deep Saudran.Yasha:Hey Saudran.San:Hi.You:Hi Yasha and San.San:who's that points at Temari.you:She's my best friend Temari.Yasha:Hi I'am Yasha.San:and I'am San.Temari whispers in your ear.Temari:wow you have hot guys on your team.You:Temari.Temari:Sorry.Kankuro:Hey Temari!Temari:Oh boy.Temari:What Kankuro? Kankuro:Who's that hot chick your with?You:Temari you where right.Temari uses her fan and hit's kankuro over his head.Kankuro:OW WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?!Temari:No hitting on my friend.Kankuro:Fine he said while rubbing his head.Temari:Her names Saudran.Kankura:What a pretty name.Temari:And her wolf Kira who she can sent and bite your head off.Kankuro is alittle worry about the wolf.Saudran:My team mates Yasha and San.Then sand swirls around and a boy appear.Kankuro:G-G-Garra g-g-good y-y-your h-h-hear.Garra:Shut up.Kankuro:o-o-okay.San mind:So that's Garra of the desert.You:whisper something to Temari.You:He's not that bad.Temari:You got to be kidding me.You:No if you look into his eyes he suffer alot and has some good in him.Temari:Hope your right about that.Garra's mind:bunch of weaklings.Demon inside of Garra:Don't be to sure that girl with the white hair she has the demon Akira inside of her.Garra:so.Demon:So her demon stronger then me and hot.Garra:somethings wrong with you.Garra:what's your name he said to you.You:Saudran.Ming:well I hope you got to know each other.Baka:Okay here's the mission we are to go to the village hidden in the leaves to sign the peace trindade.~An Hour Later~Kankuro was talking to you.You where not listening.Kankuro was not paying attention where he was walking and hit a tree.You:Hey Temari look it's kitty kitty bang bang.Temari started to laugh hard so did everyone else garra just smirked.Kankuro:take that back.You:no why should I for someone who wheres make up and plays with dolls.Everyone laugh harder.Kankuro:IT'S FACE PAINT AND A PUPPET!!!You:sure you said sarcastitly.Kankuro:GRRRRRR.....Garra just smirked.Demon:You like her do you Garra?Garra:No!!Demon:It's written all over your face that's why you feel that way around her t's love your feeling.Garra:Love?Temari:Good one Saudran.You:Thanks Temari.Ming:It's getting late let's stop today and start again in the morning.You guys set up camp.You Ming and Temari slept in a tent.San and Yasha slept in a tent.Garra and Kankuro slept in one Tent and Baka and his tent.You got your pajamas on.They where black silk.It was the middle of the night you got up because you couldn't sleep and Kira came with you.You jump into a tree and began to play your flute. this is you pretend you have white hair after you played your flute you fell asleep in the tree.Garra:why can't I take my eyes off of her.Demon:you love her.Garra:quiet.Garra:I guess I could carry her to her tent.Garra carefully carries you to your tent without waking you up and laid you down.He gave you a kiss on your cheek and left.But Garra Didn't know Temari saw everything. that's the first chapter oh and your a chunin and your team mates are too this is after the chunin exams
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Post by Kenji Uchiha on Oct 15, 2007 20:09:11 GMT -5
Nice! CTS (Continue The Story! Just in case you don't know what CTS means...)
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Post by ninjagirl101 on Oct 16, 2007 15:48:07 GMT -5
~Story starts~ You:Huh?I fell asleep in the tree how did I get back to the tent?Temari:Finally awake huh Saudran.You:Be quiet.Temari:Come on breakfest is ready.You:Okay Temari.You got dress and went outside.Yasha:Morning Saudran.You:Morning everyone.San:Here's your pancakes Saudran.You:Thanks San.After breakfest you pack up and continued to the leaf village.Then you arrived at the village.Ming:Come on stay close.Hokage:You come to sign the peace trindeum?Baka:yes lady tusnade we were trick by orchimaru.Hokage:I see please sign the scroll.After that you decided to explore the village.You got hungrey and decided to get something to eat.You walk into a ramen bar.Chief:Hello please take a seat what do you want.You:Miso ramen.Chief:coming right up.He gave you your ramen and you started to eat.Naruto:Hey who are you?You:oh i'am Saudran and you.Naruto:Naruto.You:nice to meet you naruto.Naruto:so your from the village hidden in the sand.You:Yeah.Naruto:Do you know anyone name Garra.You:Yes he's here.Naruto:What!?!You:what's wrong with Garra?Naruto:He almost killed me and my friends he's a jerk.You slam your fist on the table.You:WHAT SO GARRA DIFFRENT SO WHAT EVERYONE IS.HE'S JUST SUFFERING SO MUCH PAIN AND THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS TO PEOPLE BECAUSE PEOPLE LIKE YOU.And you left the money and left.And Naruto sorta had a heart attach from your yelling. ~Garra pov~ that's the first someone stick up for me.
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Post by Kenji Uchiha on Oct 17, 2007 18:57:20 GMT -5
CTS please!
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Post by Vanessa Anne Hugends on Oct 23, 2007 21:45:08 GMT -5
Nice! CTS
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